By Summah

Why animals should not be held in captivity?

Surely you would agree with me as to why animals should not be held in captivity?I will provide you with many reasons as to why animals should not be held in captivity.

Zoos are not natural habitats for animals .Animals are born free therefore zoos have no right to keep animals in captivity.Would you agree with me that zoos have no right to take animals away from their own environment?Animals cannot defend or protect themselves because everything is done for them.e.g water and food is provided.when they are kept in enclosures they look bored and restless .How do i know?because you can see it in their eyes.How would you feel if you were kept in captivity?

By Jessie-mya

Have you ever wondered how seeds grow? all plants and trees start life as a seed. Without seeds there will be no plants and trees and the earth will be a barren place. All instructions for life are contained in seeds. All seeds have a coat for their protection and contain food.Seeds are usually small,but some are big.

When the seed is placed in the soil,the first thing that takes hold is the roots.This happens with sunlight,water and oxygen.The roots get bigger and deeper into the soil.When this happens the plant pushes itself out of the seed,this is called germination.The seedling grows bigger and bigger.Leaves are also formed.The roots feed the plant food and water.

By Tairakena

Why animals should not be held in captivity?

You will feel good to save an animal's life.If you did not adopt an animal it will get put down.Do you think its right to put down a healthy animal?I don't think its right to put down a pet.Imagine your pet getting put down,how would you feel?Throughout the world, there are poachers that are heartless,Greedy and have no respect for animal life.They kill animals for their body parts to make medicine.They make exorbitant amounts of money by selling

the body parts.Animals in zoos will not take place but they will be same from poachers.Animals are becoming endangered and extinct.

Persuasive Writing by Sonnie

Why animals shouldn’t be in captivity

I strongly believe that animals shouldn’t

be held in captivity. I will provide you with many

reasons as to why animals shouldn’t be held

in captivity.

Animals are born free and they should be

allowed to be free. Zoos are not the natural

environment for animals. The wild or jungle

are their natural habitat . In zoos, animals are

kept in enclosures and in cages.this makes

the animals sad,bored and depressed because

of the limited space.Would you like it if you got

kept in a cage or enclosures?

Persuasive Writing by Minaia

In my opinion animals should not be held in captivity.

I will provide you with reasons as to why animals should not be held in captivity.

Zoos are not a natural habitat for animals. Animals are born free

therefore zoos should not keep them,they don’t have the right too.

how would you feel if you were one of these animals?animals cannot fended  or protect them self, why? because most of the things are done for them e.g food,water and medical care are provided for them to

survive.

by Minaia

Persuasive Writing by Marara

I strongly believe that animals should not be held in captivity.I will provide you with many reasons as to why animals should be kept in captivity.I will convince you beyond doubt in this persuasion.

Animals are born free they should be allowed to be free and not live in zoos.Zoos are not the natural environment for animals.Animals are placed in cages and enclosures .The animals are sad,bored and depressed because they only have a limited space which is very small.How would you feel if you were kept in a cage.Also in zoos,the animals don't learn how to fend  for themselves because every thing is done for them and its not their natural environment.

Compound Sentences by Karhmyn

A compound sentence contains two sentences joined by a conjunction. Here are examples of Compound sentences.

1.  Rachel waited after school for her friend, but her friend was in detention.

2.I looked for John and Sam at the park, but they already left.

3. Jack and Mark arrived late, so they missed the movie.

4. Sophie will be getting pocket money this week, she did all of her chores.

Here are some of conjunctions

For  or      Known as  

And yet    Fan Boys

Nor  so

But