Thursday, November 12, 2015

The adventures of Timmy: Timmy's Halloween By Hassaan

Timmy’s Halloween
It was a cloudy and gloomy morning, when a kid named Timmy was getting ready for Halloween. “Oh boy, It's Halloween! I can't wait to get fat!” Said Timmy. Well, you see, Timmy’s dream was to become fat because he was extremely skinny.

At dusk he started his journey to become fat. He had planned a route before trick-or-treating. He was dressed as a guy in a hockey mask with a chainsaw.

“Trick-or-treat!” He shouted at anyone who opened the door. He knocked on all the houses in his neighbourhood and his friend, Jimmy’s neighbourhood.

“Oooh! This will definitely make me fat!” Said Timmy excitedly.  He knocked on a door and he was greeted by a man in the same costume. “Hey! Nice costume bro! It looks very realistic!” Timmy admired. The man only grunted. The man’s chainsaw transformed into a knife with blood on it. “WHAT?! HOW DID YOU DO THAT?! I MUST KNOW FOR NEXT YEARS COSTUME!!!!” Timmy pleaded. “Sure” The man said. He threw the knife at Timmy. “WOAH! WATCH OUT YOU NEARLY SLICED MY HEAD OFF!!” Shouted Timmy. The knife dropped to the floor covered in blood.


  1. Well done on your narrative Hasaan,
    You have used lots of descriptive words. I'm not sure I want to know what happens next!

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  3. hi
    like your writing it's soooooo goooood